Couldn't get past the first screen. Am I supposed to click something, or press something? Had it on full screen, not full screen, in-browser, downloaded...and text on bottom was still cut off. Maybe there is a button down there? Sorry I tried everything :(
And don't worry about hand-drawn art. If you just flush those out a bit, you can say it was all on purpose and call it a day. Lot of people wouldn't mind, especially if it's obviously pencil on lined paper. Gives it charm