New ideas at 2/10:
1. About the venue, small suggestion to make the room with end. In normal, the peoples were coming from both side "end". Maybe insert a door that used for defining the "end". The purpose not just defining the room area or exit, in my mind, the edge of the room can also come in handy, the different is just make the door can let them in or out and use the room edge.
2. Similar to the first point above. The room edge can used for some secret, in normally no one is interesting to get there. So, think somethings that is "take it to the next level", such as put the glass locker in there.
3. In future version, I think we have to weak the Shiolp. His ability no longer to used it directly, leveling and spend the lust point to evolve himself. Spend a locker as evolve locker, like the normal locker, you have to grow the locker until it done. Interrupt the evolution will cause stop and lower the report's upper limit points. Speed up the evolution by abduct the designated person.
At last, a strong suggestion, hopefully this game can be selling in Steam platform. Steam is allow the game with adult content, also selling the game in Steam can be more easier to promote.