Oh! Very cute! It's cute and funny, really makes my otome heart flutters~ <3
It fits the Halloween theme too! I like the pumpkin design in the foods, super nice and look tasty!
I think UltraShiko did a very nice and constructive comment already, so I just want to pointed out a single line that still in Chinese when the enemy attacked (I presume) Mauro. It's best to look again for small mistakes like that.
Overall it showed great potential as a cute otoge! Good luck in developing it~!
Edit: Forgot to add this. I think it's better to lower the default setting for the music/sound volume. I only use 10% of my device volume, but this game really blast off music so loudly when I opened the game.