I really enjoyed the car animation in your game! I think the black and white aesthetic of the backgrounds worked quite well and fit the story.
Plot structure seems to work, I am definitely curious what might happen in further chapters. I had a bit of trouble to keep track of all the characters in my mind as there was lots of them, at least for a relatively short story. I can see it working once there are more chapters though.
You probably have already noticed but a small nitpick: The text is sometimes overflowing from the text box.
Also you might want to check your UI color scheme, as selected entries with white text are hard to see:
Other than that no technical issues. Use or Renpy is always appreciated. You even made a custom icon for the game!
All in all decent work for a solo-project.
Thank you for making this game!