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I finally got around to playing this and, oh my god, this blew me away!! I really wasn't expecting to enjoy it as much as I did. Your writing has improved so much from your previous games. This is now my favorite visual novel of yours.

The romance between Sol and Chet is so lovely; it was just heartwarming to watch them take care of each other in a cute domestic life. I enjoy the relaxed and quiet atmosphere that's present throughout the whole game. You picked such great music to go with this; it really helped set the mood. The piano song has a wonderful melancholic feel to it that makes the world feel dreamy. It worked so well for the romantic and tense moments.

Sol's journey to standing up to her parents really resonated with me. I relate to her a lot, as I too have overbearing parents that want to decide how I live my life. In the beginning, I was a little annoyed at how Sol was so timid about telling her parents no, as it seemed so simple to me. But once I met her parents, I really understood why she was afraid of them. They use such cold manipulation tactics to guilt-trip you into doing what they want. The way they just decided how she felt, as if that's something they got to control, is so reminiscent of my own parents. I could feel myself getting so pissed with how Sol's mom talked down to her. It really is easier to stay quiet instead of fighting back. Parents like hers are just so emotionally exhausting. The moment she stood up to her parents and made her decision known, I was filled with so much satisfaction. That scene was excellently written. I think it'll be stuck in my head for a while haha.

tl;dr Super great story! Sol's arc was relatable and had me so invested. I really look forward to your next visual novel 🥰

Edit: Also will we ever see Lyon? I want to know about them 👀

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Thank you so much for the kind words! Hopefully the timeliness of my reply isn’t too late - I’ve been dealing with thing after thing IRL and haven’t had the chance to sit down and respond in depth :”)

I’m really happy you enjoyed the game! It was fun thinking about what Sol and Chet’s lives would be like in the future and I’m glad I got to write about it. Sol is my favourite poor little meow meow... Chet is my favorite guinea pig... they can live together and be cute 🥺

I’m also glad you brought up the dynamic between Sol and her parents! It was something I wanted to explore since it’s shaped her character since the beginning. I didn’t get to write about it in Moments though, except for a few hints about her parents never being around. So writing the part where she stands up to them was cathartic 😤

As for Lyon, I have an entire story for them in my head. I have... no idea when I’ll put it onto paper since there are a whole bunch of other projects I want to do ORZ 

But someday we will see more of them... *stares out into the sunset*

Thank you again! I hope I can make more games soon!