First, I really appreciated the effort made for the trigger warning, being easily spooked it's important to me! It's hard to judge the story on a demo, but I really like the world building so far and Jesse. Their internal turmoil is really well done.
Also, it's probably the UI designer in me talking but I love the effect in chapter titles, so damn cool. The choice of font too and the parallax in the CG!
Good job <3