This was pretty interesting, and there were some cool concepts I would like to see explored more. A magical girl detective is something I don't think we've seen enough of! I'd say that the biggest gripe I had was just that the world felt a little empty - I ended up being startled in the Factory when I ran into the Evil Girl since there weren't many other people around. The notifications for whenever you could interact with things was very helpful though, and felt like a nice quality of life addition.