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this was SO GOOD, I loved it so much!!! as someone not so fluent in english (like, i can read but it's complicated to write, so much so i'm using the translator now) i didn't see any grammatical mistakes and i found your writing AWESOME, I will definitely look forward to the next chapters

and please, you CAN'T make a character as cute as Liam and then hope we don't get attached to him, I was already wondering how we would raise the heroine together, be like those margarine commercial families and then BOOOM he died :(

congratulations you managed to make me raise a family, then become a widow and single mother all in less than 2 minutes, hope you are happy >:(

Skysky2 years ago

Hi! Oh my god, I was ecstatic when I read your comment! AHAHAHAHAHAH.. I was writing chapter 1 and I decided to check my itch.io account and I saw this. First of all, thank you for finding my writing okay. I mean I was really struggling with how to put my own ideas from my language into English. As my dialect really distracts me from making a good story even now I'm struggling to make the grammar fit what I imagine it would look. I really appreciate this comment so much so thank you!!.. Second, about Liam. HAHHAHAHA I made him purposely attached to the player right from the start to clearly emphasize the MC's personality.. I won't spoil anything but I'll assure you one thing.. The prologue is not the end of Liam's journey... Third and last.. The chapters.. As I was saying I was really busy at my school as an active student writing thesis and projects ( I snuck my free time to do the prologue and a little bit of styling this game.. I slightly regret a little bit because my teacher got mad when I passed my introduction in thesis.. HAHAHHAHHA I deserve it I know... ) so I don't know if I can post the chapter and portray the story well but I'll try my best to work faster. First thing first I should really finish my thesis before anything else.. Anyways.. Thank you for your comment you made my day awesome.. I hope to see you in the next chapter uploads..Toodles!! :P