this was SO GOOD, I loved it so much!!! as someone not so fluent in english (like, i can read but it's complicated to write, so much so i'm using the translator now) i didn't see any grammatical mistakes and i found your writing AWESOME, I will definitely look forward to the next chapters
and please, you CAN'T make a character as cute as Liam and then hope we don't get attached to him, I was already wondering how we would raise the heroine together, be like those margarine commercial families and then BOOOM he died :(
congratulations you managed to make me raise a family, then become a widow and single mother all in less than 2 minutes, hope you are happy >:(