Truly excellent pixel art--so much detail, you did some really interesting camera angles, and the folds in the clothing look really naturalistic. You really went above and beyond with the implementation, too--the figures moving past the window and the fully interactive computer interface with the windows and everything.
The way the teens text is very veristic--you've really captured that texting cadence. I would have liked a skip button, though; I felt like I spent a lot of time waiting for texts to type.