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I agree, CB. I just started the game and have found multiple instances of incorrect spelling. I would be happy to read your dialogue content and make the necessary corrections and send it back to you for implementation into the game. My mind already adjusts the misspelled words so I read them correctly, but some sentence construction is making no sense, hence why I would willingly proofread your story for you.

Just sayin'.

Hello, I have already a proofreader who work on it since the day 8 or 9 (if I remember) ... And he work on the begining of the game too but he haven't finish  and it's not fix yet. But if you think the english in the last day of the game (like day 10 to the end) are also a mess, maybe I can accept your offer.

Badvador,

I went until the very end of the current version and there are a huge amount of spelling errors and a lot of the dialogue doesn't make sense with its current structure, so I would be very willing to help correct your dialogue for the VN and get it right back to you ASAP. Just let me know if you'd like the assist or not. Have a great day. 

Regards,

Mzel

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If you want to work on it, if you have time to loose, I will be glad! Have you a better mail box to talk? like discord or messenger?

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I have discord - ID Replacedtxn#1955