Hey nice job! I can tell you put a bunch of effort into it all though I do think it can improve.
Accouple of recommendations that might help you out:
- Presentation: I think one of the most important things to keep in mind is that your color pallet and design are eye catching. When I saw your emblem for the game and then ran your game I noticed the emblem doesn't reflect the art style or look of the game. If you can try to keep those one in the same :)
- The first 30 seconds of any game are the MOST valuable. Try to utilize that to your advantage.
Keep working on it and polish it up!