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Hey nice job! I can tell you put a bunch of effort into it all though I do think it can improve.

Accouple of recommendations that might help you out: 

  1. Presentation: I think one of the most important things to keep in mind is that your color pallet and design are eye catching. When I saw your emblem for the game and then ran your game I noticed the emblem doesn't reflect the art style or look of the game. If you can try to keep those one in the same :)
  2.  The first 30 seconds of any game are the MOST valuable. Try to utilize that to your advantage.

Keep working on it and polish it up!

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I honestly didn't think anyone would see it, This was just for fun and obviously its not that good but thanks and I apricate it a lot ill add on to it Make it better.