Thank you so much for taking the time to play and for this kind feedback -- I appreciate it! The text issue is so interesting -- after receiving your comment I played it on Safari, Chrome, Firefox, and had someone else look for this on another computer/OS and couldn't reproduce it, which makes it the worst kind of bug :). Could you see the faint text during the platforming scenes (in the Park, during the dream), or just within the cutscenes with text (i.e., in between lines)? Thank you for pointing this out, this is really helpful. And thanks again for playing and commenting!
Weird that you can't reproduce it! My computer is weird with brightness, so it might be something to do with my settings. But it honestly wasn't that intrusive, and wasn't visible in the platforming scenes. What I seem to see is that in the dialogue/story scenes, you sometimes have pauses between lines of narration instead of a line immediately following the previous one. That last line was still visible after it seemingly faded to transparency in this scenario. Here's a snapshot I just took towards the end of the game.
1 year ago(+1)
Great, thank you for this! I actually can't see it in the attached image, so it may well be my monitor that's the problem. But your info about it appearing between lines in cutscenes is perfect -- I think I can fix it in an update. Thank you!