Not my cup of tea as far as "content." The story was interesting, but I feel like having on solitary character dedicated to exposition hurts it overall. Too many headless statues....
I definitely agree. I tried making the statues expressive and unique but the MC needs to talk for them essentially. But at the same time if you have too many talking statues the whole premise becomes a bit meaningless. "They're statues but they're basically just like people with a weird skin tone." It's a hard balance. Finding ways to make them "talk" with the limitations of their bodies makes it more interesting imho. Execution might have been a bit lacking at times. Of course thanks for the review nonetheless.