Couple of things:
- The game's really dark. Maybe it's intentional, but I found myself not being able to see more than 2 feet in front of me.
- All the rooms look the same, and there's not really a map or any landmarks, so it's really easy to get lost.
- Kind of weird that the game doesn't start you in the room with the vampire, wandered in the dark for a lot to get to him.
- Could use some sound effects to not be as quiet
Other than that, not bad! Polish it up and could be pretty good.