the way you added health to a pogo game feels really good and the graphics all work well
I respawned at the start even after reaching the start of zone 2 but I expected a checkpoint system, so I quit.
I think this would be more markettable if you started out far easier and introduced and tested concepts more slowly with a checkpoint system. you could tack on to the very end of the game a large marathon section to satisfy the Bennett Foddy desire
I did not like the eyeball gimmick.