Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a detailed comment, and for making a YT video! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
And yeah, I have a bit of a tendency to over-describe things. The rough draft for this story was about 35k, I trimmed it down to like 23k or thereabouts during editing, since there was a lot of description and internal monologuing which slowed down the pacing. I suppose I could've trimmed things even more, but I'm pretty partial to using Lots And Lots Of Words haha ;;
Thank you for your feedback, in any case; it's appreciated!