-I feel like the styles for hovered and non-hovered text should be inverted. Options should become more visible when hovered.
-Game viewport is letterboxed at 16:10.
-Dragging to open the door wasn't entirely intuitive, and you have to drag it twice to open it fully.
-Why do I have to stop and hold Shift just to interact with things?
-Is there a reason for why you can't move while holding Shift? I feel like it breaks the flow of the game.
-Text box fade out animation takes too long.
-Softlocked when I tried dragging the first turnip I picked up to the bag icon and it vanished.
-The trigger point for levers should be closer to the middle.
-Dragging items out of your inventory sometimes doesn't work, and the inventory sometimes opens on hover instead of only when clicked.
-Placed 7 turnips in the box, but only 4 appeared. The last one got launched off to the side and disappeared.
-Items in the world sometimes change location when you open and close the inventory.
-On the 3rd attempt of putting the turnips in the box, the 6th turnip launched another one into the ocean.
-I don't think the slow movement speed adds anything to the experience (at least not in a good way).
-4th attempt: 6th turnip got launched into the ocean when I took it out of the inventory.
-Finally managed to put the turnips in the box on the 5th attempt.
-Grabbing the inward doorknob on a door from the outside makes the door snap inwards.
-Walking into the witch's house makes you jitter back and forth.
-Clicking the inventory while looking at an NPC will both open the inventory and talk to the NPC.
-Giving NPCs items should be done by letting go of the mouse button, not just by hovering it over them.
-I don't think the text in the outro benefited from being auto-scrolling, and if you're going to have auto-scrolling text, it should be presented in a different way than normal text.
Text errors:
There's a lot of commas missing when the characters refer to the player as "Detective".
Intro (when skipping tutorial):
"character you meet" --> "characters you meet"; comma splice after the above.
Farmer:
"I'm in a pickle at the moment, would you help me out with something?" is two sentences. You can't have a comma there. If you want to emphasize a connection between two separate sentences, you use a semicolon.
Some of his lines have missing capitals at the start of sentences.
Another comma splice after "I counted yesterday".
"Hey Thanks" --> "Hey, thanks"
Old man:
"kings" --> "king's"
Guard:
"kings" --> "king's"
Missing some capitals.
Witch:
You can't have a comma after an exclamation mark.
"this but. There's a rumor" --> "this, but there's a rumor"
Outro:
Titles should only be capitalized if used in place of a name. Just "Old Man" is correct, but "the Old Man" is not.