So you could sort of use the motes to slingshot yourself if you don't complete the whole maneuver? That's an interesting idea; the speed of that movement would probably need to be reduced, or it would be very difficult to control, but it could work. Some testing would be required to see how fun / difficult that is.
I tried to style this particular maneuver on Sonic the Hedgehog's homing attack, and I had to end up using a Lerp to move D to the mote, since I was having trouble with getting it to work right with just physics. So I'd also have to figure that out too if I were to try this!
As for the dialogue ending suddenly, yeah. We had limited time, and probably too big of a story scope, so we sort of treated this like an opening chapter rather than a complete book, if that makes sense.
Thanks for playing and for leaving such detailed feedback!