I remember first playing this game quite a while ago, back then the story ended pretty much where it is now. I've seen in the comments that there has been some kind of "rework" for the game, welp, that's nice. Before I start ranting I would like to make it clear that I like this game and where it's going. I just feel like there can be improvements.
This version seems to have expanded on a few things while removing others...I remember something about Selena not being too happy with the amount of women around MC that's not here now. Maybe it's better this way I guess, less awkward. (Btw believe it or not Selena's theme music was the one thing that caused me to search for this game again. I love the lighthearted, friendly commoner feel to it. Suits her well.)
Celestia had more backstory than my first playthrough...that seems to have done very little to change her personality. It's a little unconvincing for her to be so trusting. (sleeping in a stranger's bed in her underwear is not exactly what I would call being wary of humans) Overall it's great, but can maybe be improved a little.
It's a shame that the events with Ferry are so few. I know it probably has to do with polls but she is one of the only main characters who feels like a real, responsible adult instead of teenagers or downright children. (Yes I'm talking about you Celestia/Estelle).
One small issue I've noticed, during the events with Altina MC returns home to ask Sylvia for food...and despite me going for default settings in the beginning , i.e. Sylvia being MC's landlady, he calls her mom in the dialogue. Probably unintended right?
Makoto, Altina, Sylvia and Azula have been written pretty well, although I do wish MC here had more conversation with them. Aren't you the least bit curious about Pandy and how it's supposed to be able to kill you with a stroke? Don't you want to know more about where your powers or horns are with you being half Valla and all that? Are you concerned about why you have a vision of someone else waking Azula instead of you? Do you like being special in a way or would you rather be normal and pretend it's all just Azula's delusion?
Sometimes I feel like he is a honest or at least a sensible person and other times I agree with Estelle that he is a pervert and a manbaby on the side. If I have to pick a most inconsistent character I would pick him. (Lol. I can almost convince myself that he is secretly a highly intelligent individual who uses the right face for the right job, acting dumb when it suits him and reasonable when otherwise. ) Although I can relate as a beginner writer how difficult it is to shape your protagonist through the entire story. It feels better near the later half of Atty's storyline though, I hope it stays that way.
Oh and the reason I am here in the first place... Is the flower girl aware that all those rare flowers she saved have been severed and ripped away from their home in the park no more than a hundred meters behind her because she wants them in the first place? Mmmm. tastes like irony.