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Hi, PhantomFreak!
Thank you for writing this review & I'm sorry for this very late reply Q_Q
I keep missing the notification--but I'm really flattered that you take the time to write this!

Your score is very fair considering the flaws I have, but I'm still very glad that you finished all of their routes! Your description of their stories are accurate and made me feel nostalgic ^///^ at times, I also feel embarrassed because I know exactly what you're talking about & I can't help but laugh.

I know I still have room to grow, but sometimes, I can't seem to help myself to write untimely jokes/becoming too imaginative (which becomes a plothole) 😅 which is why I'm always grateful to my proofreaders! They're my lifesavers, constantly reminding me to improve, quality-control, help my grammar, etc. I love english but my sense of humor can be really weird sometimes, it's either a miss or a hit lol. Inspiration also comes and go, but I will always do my best to improve >:)

Again, thank you for the love and for your thorough review <3
xoxo,

SweetChiel

edit: P.S. If you have some free time, I recommend for you to Bermuda later when it's finished ^.^)/ it'll explain better about time loop/multiverse theory like Dgcast04 said!

Hey, SweetChiel! I'm glad that you took the time to both read and reply to my review. It's pleasing to know that my descriptions of the characters were not only accurate, but enough to incite some nostalgia in you and make you laugh. Your acknowledgment of your flaws, and ambition to grow as a writer is really admirable. I respect how you humbly accept criticism, see where it's coming from, and use that to further your resolve to improve. Not everyone has that attitude. Though, I hope that you don't take whatever I say too much to heart haha. At the end of the day, I believe that we should write the stories that we want and find interesting; not put too much stock in what the readers want. It's always good to take them into consideration, but prioritizing our own vision is more likely to guarantee us in leaving a product that we can feel proud and happy with, I think. ^^

Anyway, I never really considered there being a multiverse or any loop theory, although I have heard of both. I can have a habit of looking at things from an overly logical stance sometimes, neglecting to suppose a more creative, out-of-the-box view of things lol. But like I mentioned, this wasn't really clarified or explicitly indicated in the story, and I guess it was left more as an open ending kind of thing (?) for us to decide ourselves, as Dgcast04 pointed out. Maybe not. Regardless, it's why I think it was part of how it was easy for me to fail to think about, and assume it as a "plot hole." However, I do appreciate the food for thought from Dgcast04 and their explanation to my question.

And as for the edit, I actually have seen your newer game! I haven't played it, yet. I read in your other response that Bermuda was made with the purpose of explaining the multiple universe/timelines thing more effectively. That sounds rather cool, imo and does entice me to possibly check it out in the future when it's done. Hopefully it does shed light on some things, like you said.

All in all, I give you my best regards, 

PhantomFreak

hi can you help me when i started reksas route i only got the bad ending because i ddint get the option of giving him the pink crystal