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Thanks for the feedback. I've updated the document with introductory paragraphs to better explain what the game really is and how it is played. I hope it now lies in a better state for future readers. 

To be fair this is the first time I am receiving such well-structured feedback and even though I had begun losing heart on this project it has moved me once again to look into it and start searching for ways to improve it. 

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Yea! I just read through it and it just generally helps with getting the findamentals of the game across

I'm glad I could provide feedback for you, this is what any game dev processes boil down to, just iterating and finding different angles to things. It always helps to give your stuff to different people because everyone will find different things that are good/bad about something