I really liked the art! I can't read Chinese well, but I got so far as handing the ring to the cat!
My feedback would be to try to target to your audience! I'm assuming that most of the people participating are more likely to be able to read English than Chinese. For people that can't understand what being said, it takes away a lot of context from your game.
Congrats on getting this shipped out though! If you want more people to look at your game, I suggest posting comments and reviews for other games in the game jam!