HELLO!! I am not discouraged at all by your words, in fact, I feel the exact opposite!! Thank you SO much for pointing all of that out, I know I'm kind of an inexperienced writer and I hope I'll get better at that 😤✨
This visual novel was mostly supposed to be something short to introduce a new oc (you can take a guess haha) to my followers on Instagram but eventually, I got a little too absorbed into it and ended up coding the whole thing and adding more branches :0
It has been a big dream of mine to make a visual novel since I started doing art so although I spent more time doing it than I should've, I don't regret a bit! And I believe that if I ever decide to make another (I hope!) I'll pay more attention to the storyline and events and make it more interesting!!
Thank you again for playing and enjoying my game, you made me very happy!! And also thank you for your detailed analysis 😭🙏 Very appreciated 💖💞