Well Done! Very Beautiful and well told story which also did not detract from the hardships that indians went through. Artwork is also very beautiful and I look forward to your future projects!
Two suggestions I have:
1. Consider making this playable through WebGL so that it can be easier to share and be played by more people. It may also run on certain mobile devices and you could add extra inputs/buttons for the sections with movement when it is played on those platforms.
2. During the dialouge when the player needs to click, add a small indicator to tell the player they must press/click a button to continue the story.
Once again, Well done!