The game's really well made, and it's impressive that you pulled this off for a jam game, it looks very good and polished, and it also feels great to play! Very good job! 😁
The only negative points that I could find are that you have to go through every dialog when you get caught, and that there's no shadow underneath the player to know where I'm going to land.
It would be nice to have the option to skip the dialogs, at least after you first read them.
And since the sense of perception is not very good in these kind of games, you should really consider adding a shadow underneath the player like Mario 64 does. This way, players can calculate jumps better!