So, over the last five of these jams that I've been a part of, I've read stories about alien possession, body-horror mutation, and more zombies, nightmares, and daemonic plagues than I can shake a plasma sword at. For my money this was the best horror story I've ever read here. You've unflinchingly captured what Hannah Arendt called 'the banality of evil': just people, just doing a job... that happens to be monstrously horrifying. Your choice of the stolen sandwich as a framing device was amazing - it's *the* image of petty office politics, and the contrast of Ed's concern for his sandwich in the face of real evil was downright chilling. Overall a very grim and compelling work, nicely done.