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Very good writing so far and good renders. While the writing is really good it may result in too much to read for some players and I kind of feel the progression of the story it's a little bit too slow paced. Despite this, is a work with a lot of potential because the author is a good writer.

Thank you! I can see why you'd think it's a bit slow paced, but hopefully the next release will speed up a bit of the progression. The first release was primarily meant as an intro and laying the framework for the story, so it should pick up speed as releases come out.