This is a very intriguing work and I really like what you've set up here. I wish the whole work was about the first narrator, the "Goddess of Sin and Evil". To me, *she* was the most interesting character in the piece, and I would love to explore more of the mythos around her. Why has a goddess of music been forced into the role of goddess of evil? Who's "requiring" that she visit cruelty on people? Who are the other divinities she speaks about, and how do they fit into this? For my two bits, it's her story that really reflects on what it means to be a "bad guy" in one of the most classic ways: is it, or when is it, acceptable to do evil to attain a good outcome? Do the ends justify the means, in other words.