I really liked how the theme was flipped on its head. As someone who likes to rebel a bit against prompts, I'm definitely taking notes on the use of its phrasing! A fun short story that leaves room for further antics in a follow-up.
Thank you - I appreciate the praise! I know I've said this on your own story's page, but I liked what you did with the theme as well, where you played into the cultural aspects of the prompt, so I'm very gratified that you liked where I took it.