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I'd agree with others that the story does a good job of maintaining suspense and pace with the use of present tense. It comes across as stylistically refreshing and different, and I personally think it should have been carried through to the end. Perhaps switching to past tense only for the last bit would have been an interesting way to emphasize his presumed fate?

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Noted, I will try and see how I can use past tense to my advantage next time.