Ok, so, Main Character is very cool, I really like the whole theme and didn't fully understand the piece of bread in her mouth but I found it incredibly funny nonetheless, and the little sounds when she was charging the speed and jumping, really liked that.
Overall Graphics and models were good enough.
Music was very cool, but also very repetitive.
As for the gameplay, this was definitely the low point of the game, I like the idea and think it will turn-out amazing, once you can fix and rework some things, Sonic vibes all along, I used to love the 3D sonic games! But yeah camera was unplayable on keyboard and mouse, a little better on controller but still not very pleasant, movement was similar, felt a little too slidey and unexpected, I died I dumb amount of times because I was having a hard time judging jump distance and how much input to give. (Sidenote, I like the checkpoint system, with a few exceptions it would usually take me right back to where I was before, but I would like to ask that you lower the amount of time one has to wait before restarting, also I wish you could do the dash thing not only when airborne but also when in the ground).
From looking at the screenshots it seems as though I sadly gave up a little too early because it seems you had much more for me to look at. But as a whole this is a pretty creative and fun take on speedy 3D platforming, if you can touch up the gameplay, add some variation to the music, fix some keyboard and mouse compatibility and give us some more info on the story or plot of the game, I think it would make for a really awesome time! Great job, specially if you guys are new at this, quite impressive!