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Like someone said, it's clean.

More than decent art, coherent artstyle.

I like the shirt of Cy (important).

Enjoyed the Honey scene in the kitchen, it was smooth.

The "poking the magical girl trope" falls a little flat.

Poking is not enough, it's too expectable. It's not spicy enough.

In my opinion anyway. Not showing any magical girl transformed in a magical girl VN is cool though, leaves room for imagination and the protagonist not being a magical girl is cool too.

The end is kinda abrupt but it's to be expected in a one week jam. There's already a lot of work in this and it shows.

Has a good Juice and lacks some Guts.

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Thanks so much for the feedback!

I definitely agree, I went a little too hard on telling-not-showing when it came to the magical girl elements. Ideally I wanted to weave the tropes into the story much more organically (have finished sprites for ALL of the girls on the team and show them as a fleshed out team, have a longer intro to explain the team's backstory, show more through Cy's internet browsing etc) but unfortunately doing this jam 100% by myself and with a full time job, the exposition just ended up very ham-fisted through dialogue instead because I ran out of time to do all that I wanted. Definitely something I'm planning to improve on in the future!

I'm glad you like the ambiguity of not seeing the girls transformed! I do plan to show their magical girl attire in the full finished version of the game, again it was just down to time constraints. Not showing their transformed alter-egos yet was a worry I had when it came to submitting this demo, so I'm actually relieved to hear that you liked that aspect. ^^

Thanks for the rating and review! :)