Like someone said, it's clean.
More than decent art, coherent artstyle.
I like the shirt of Cy (important).
Enjoyed the Honey scene in the kitchen, it was smooth.
The "poking the magical girl trope" falls a little flat.
Poking is not enough, it's too expectable. It's not spicy enough.
In my opinion anyway. Not showing any magical girl transformed in a magical girl VN is cool though, leaves room for imagination and the protagonist not being a magical girl is cool too.
The end is kinda abrupt but it's to be expected in a one week jam. There's already a lot of work in this and it shows.
Has a good Juice and lacks some Guts.