Hi,
I played this game on Android and it was decent. The monster design is good and the map is visually appealing.
There were some bugs I encountered:
- The word "jammed" is spelt with an "m" not an "n".
- The monster noclipped through the security key door which ended my run.
- The "bell" page is supposed to alert the monster (I think) but she didn't seem to care much.
There are also a few improvements which would be nice:
- There are not enough hiding spots... it would be nice if you could hide under beds, especially in the room pictured above which is a dead end.
- You should have more than one life, as dying makes you lose all your progress.
- The sound queues are not clear enough on mobile (I wasn't wearing headphones) so you should add a clear indicator (e.g. a heartbeat or chase music) for when she is near you.
- The story is lacking which is fine but a brief explanation of who the monsters are would be nice.
- Instead of clicking on the item to interact, a hand button would be good. I was dragging the right joystick and accidentally pressed the closet door which would've been bad if the monster saw me.
- I am not sure the coins system works well for a horror game, it would be better with a linear level unlocking system.
- The monster moves in a strange manner, almost like a statue which makes it hard to know where she's heading.
The mobile version does have ads but they only play at the start of a run so they aren't too intrusive.
Good job! <3