The game idea is a quite a bit different than what I expected but it was fun. I just didn't really get why the shotgun range is so small because it looks like a melee attack at this point but that's alright as there are some particles that shows the range. I thought that the kid would play on his computer, dream, develop something, reviews, dream again. Basically, your game could have some follow-up because the story is interesting. Overall good work! (I just highlighted the downsides).