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Hey, i looking forward to play again when you add more story for us.


I did not hint at the possibility of escaping from the Organization (although if you think about it, you can think of it as coming up with a separate storyline), only at the inaction of the hero who seemed a little soft or something. As for fatigue, I didn't think about it, for which I apologize, although it would be possible to directly write about it in the form of a narrative or the hero's thoughts about escaping from the car.

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I'm glad you're interested in the story, so thanks! :)

You make some great points, and I'll definitely be considering them when I do my second draft! I do think that mentioning fatigue/reasoning for not being hostile in the game is a good idea.  I do want players to be able to relate to the MC, so this feedback is very important and helpful. Thank you very much for your thoughts and suggestions, have a lovely day!