Dream of the Moon: This is great for the product of jamming and experimentation! The main guitar riff is pensive and ripe for reflection on a breezy oceanic night. I also think you have good pacing for a solid overall structure to the track. Nice work!
Something is Changing Within Me: The “something” that is changing feels quite on-point with the sharp synth line. I appreciate the use of the deeper synths to help support it. Toward the beginning there is an alarm sound that trails off with some reverb – I think the main lead synth line would benefit from having the same reverb placed on it.
The Fever is Rising: I really like the bassline you have going at the beginning! The soft mallet/bells that emerge at about a minute in feel really nice against the low growl of the bass and deep drums. The soft echoey guitar that follows is what sells me on this really feel like your title describes – that sound is the musical embodiment of what a fever feels like: it comes up slowly and you start to feel woozy and just kind of stuck in a loop. I think this is my favorite track from your submission!
Undiscovery: The squealy synths in the background sound almost alien-like and add to the descent of the main character. This track almost sounds a little happy with the major chords, but I wonder if that might be part of the trickery of the fever.
Moonlit Sincerity/Only Us: The reverb on the guitar feels really nice. I like the high bell that doubles the main melodic line – this for me helps tie in the theme of all the shooting stars in the sky over the ocean waves. This track feels very nice and peaceful compared to some of the previous tracks.
Beneath the Surface: I really like how you leave it up to the listener to decide whether he has stepped out to his freedom or out to his doom. In listening to this track, I think I could go either way! I think you found a nice combination of both of these endings – he meets his doom, but he doesn’t mind because he feels free. Overall I’m really happy that you decided to use your sound on this because that’s when magic happens. Great work and thank you for sharing!