This is up there as one of the best demos I've ever played. This is also a high-quality parody in both are and character. I'm really looking forward to this.
Also did you pre hookup Luna and Sam on purpose, because I remember them getting together after Ronni left. I ask because ways to avoid NTR you can have the story be Lincoln helping her and Sam get together leading into group fun.
Either way this demo was really solid. To the point where I don't have any genuine advice. Make what YOU have planned. I have a feeling it'll be immaculate. Also, a well written in character romance content *chef's kiss* that's the stuff man.