Hi!! The game is great, especially the art, music and effects, all very original! It shows that you have put a lot of dedication and passion into the game. What I stand out the most is its humor and original visual aspect.
I played until I finished the forest with the big tree, it took me 1 hour in total.
I leave you some comments that may help you in the development.
There are some bugs:
- I left "always run" enabled, but if you have that enabled and use the "C" sweep, it doesn't work. You have to keep shift pressed and, when walking, the sweep works, but in slow motion. I guess that's not what you wanted to happen...
- When doing the sweep in the area that you find the monkey (Grasp), you can see the dust through the wall.
- In the boat scene, before you drop down and meet Grise, if you take a long time to scroll through the text of the dialogues, the images with "flying objects" disappear before finishing the natural course.
- Items from the library chest in the first city appear two more squares to the left than they should.
- Now that I've finished, the forest is deactivated, but when I came for the first time, I was supposed to press a switch and run to get through the place covered by the branches. However, I was able to get past them just by jumping, no switch needed... I could get past any of the branches.
Opinions:
- The image that shows the control and the buttons seems a bit annoying to me... it's very big and covers. Could you maybe add some transparency to it?
- The first town seemed very big to me, with so many houses and shops open... maybe they could limit your access to certain places to focus first on what you should go to the forest?
That would be all...
Good luck with the development of the game!
PS: English is not my native language, I used Google translate, but I hope it helps you :P