The story was really nice. I liked the various characters and of course, the voice acting along with all the cutscenes.
Would love to see more characters and voice acting in the art style ^^The the story kept me from quitting.
It took me a while to complete the "road crossing" part. The collision rects were too big so squeezing between the fast cars was almost impossible.
The input is also not as responsive, it totally ignores my input if you press during the walk animation, you had to time your inputs just right to outrun the cars, took me a while before I figured out this part.
Your style has potential, keep moving forward :D