>Music lover Aria should differentiate between genres
She was being asked what genres she plays and lists them as four different genres. I'm not sure what you're getting at
>at every Opportunity the Author just goes "This Flower is very Beautiful. Like the Face of God, which changed my Life by the Way. If you open your Heart to them, you too could see the Light." And then continues on a page long Love letter instead of talking about the Flower in Question.
I feel that this is very disingenuous. The only time that Christianity is outright praised is in the religious literature class or inside of the books that are literally quoting Christian authors. Outside of that, it's just the MC trying to be a good Christian. You'll have to quote me anything more specific that comes across this blatantly sickeningly sweet and flowery
>the amount of it is overbearing
Even so, I'll still keep it in mind and lump it into consideration with what everyone else says. If enough people feel that it's too in your face and not enough people feel it's just right or too little, then I'll make accommodations for it to be less in your face, or at least space them out a lot more with more slice of life character interactions, but I already removed some "perfect Christian MC moments" that I'm thinking of reserving for another character anyways. The MC already feels like a lukewarm Christian to me who doesn't do a lot, but he IS self-conscious about that not that he's at a Catholic school. That's how I'm intending it to come off as anyways. It might also be because so much of our life is secular that having a thought a day about religion can seem like a lot when even in the past 150 years every thought might have been guided by religion.
>apologizing for criticism
Don't worry about it. I wouldn't be in AGDG if I couldn't handle criticism so criticize away!