bro, the visual novel is essentially just "sexy gummi bears", I don't see how it can get more cringe than it already is
You do realise it's a fantasy game? Realism probably wasn't something the publisher was going for, and that's fine
fantasy doesnt excuse bad writing my friend....
characters don't have enough depth to them and they seemingly live from day by day, such writing is characteristic for children's literature
The game is still in very early stages, you could give your criticisms in a way that doesn't just bash the game for not being the way you envision the game should be, it's not your game, not your project
