I'm sorry for being harsh in my post, perhaps I should have held back until further into the story and I'm trying to do just that. But the whole theme just feels downright 'creepy'. I'm really hoping that by the time I reach the end, I'll end up hating myself for my first comment and perhaps I will. but so far.....
I think what really bothers me is more centered around alot of the phrasing used. Many things could have been written differently without sacrificing the actual story intent and not come across as a walking sexual crime scene.
I suppose I'll just have to keep pushing on.
