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AAAAAHHHHHH ITS HERE!!!!!!!!!!!!

okay that video gave me goosebumps! I'm going to share this every single place I can and I already added it to my wishlist on Steam! Your effort and passion is clear as ever and I can't wait to see the future of this project!

guess it's time to do another playthrough. Missed the writing and of course I missed the beautiful Zoey

I'm curious will Onyx be making a appearance before the end of the chapter? Want to see some power

Alex will forever be my favorite! seeing her render on the game page was the deciding factor on downloading the game the first time. Getting to know her only made it better. I like the other girls too but can't wait for more content with her and moments for the two characters to spend time together. I mean who doesn't love a cute tomboy?

hope everything's going well SMG! Every once in awhile I got to do a replay of what you have out so far to remind myself just how good this story is. So much depth in each and every single character with wonderfully written personalities. The amount of lore  is insane and you have to pay attention every time you replay it because you just might miss a detail. I've said this about other stories and I'm going to say it about yours. This story deserves to be told! There's so many half-assed sleazy and lazy AVNs out there but you have something really incredible here. Every click of the mouse just sucks you in deeper no matter how many times you played it. When I try and get a friend into adult visual novels this is one of the games I always put on the list of suggestions to get others to understand how incredible the stories are out there that they miss out on. 

So again I say I hope you are doing well and that the development is going smoothly for you. Be safe SMG!

you did a great job cleaning up the clarity on the animations and fixing the sound.( think the audio might be missing from the bondage magic circle.)

I mentioned in my first comment on your main page about adding story elements. If you reach your point where you're still racking your brain for ideas I would love to put you the story that kept popping in my head roaming around what you have so far.

No problem at all and thank you for taking the time to reply to my comment! my mind is honestly bristling with ideas but I'm going to try and just be patient to see what Direction You Go.

All right so I took a quick look around goofed off for a bit. 

First the good. Overall the vibe character model and scenery seems pretty good to me. You've done a good job designing not only the character but also the surrounding area that you can explore so far.

Though there's not a lot to do so far except goof off with some dildos and the moaning was very quiet. Also the animation interacting with a dildos was very blurry.

But honestly just the vibe alone and the work you put in I feel like you're sitting on a gold mine of potential here if you were to see it through. Honestly kind of like the idea of a powerful Gothic sorceress who used to spend her days lounging around in her mansion using that very magic to just get off to keep boredom away. " ooh a new spell?... how can I use this to get off?"  Here are some personal suggestions.

1. Get you some story established first off. An opening with a reason why you'll be solving puzzles. Lower notes and journals to find along with it stuff like that. 

2. Get some character creation in there let people modify the way the character looks and not just the clothing. 

3. I would add at least a single enemy that is your goal to reach. Like she's supposed to be going through these puzzles maybe somebody locked her out of her own house and she needs to get to them and teach them a lesson. 

weird maybe I'm going crazy. Could have swore the last update also ended with a sex scene with a certain barista if you chose that route.. 

LOL definitely should have paid attention to the update notes I thought I was going crazy when a few things were slightly different. Wish there was further story progression in this update but I can definitely respect taking the time to polish up what you've already made. Too many Developers don't take the time to go back and fix Little Things. Keep up the good work hopefully the next update isn't too far down the road. Side note though I swear you had a Discord.... am I going crazy or did it get deleted or something?

okay I haven't reached chapter 5 yet but is a Tracker menu ever going to be put in? Like something that keeps track of how much on the light and dark path you're on as well as how the relationship is going with the different girls? Got multiple saves going on and I don't want to get them mixed up and it would be really helpful to have something like that so I don't save over a playthrough where I am going for a particular relationship path.

Other than that Peak game and wonderful story that keeps you sucked in with beautifully rendered models and scenery.

its here

YYYYEEEEEEESSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!

Quick question! Am I the only one that kind of wants the first boss battle nerfed? I tried for like an hour and nothing. I know there's the option to skip the battle but last time I did that honestly it took the wind out of me to continue playing....

Paid the full $10 ? if so scroll up hit the download button next to where it says that you purchased the game for $10 you'll have three download options choose the third one that says 0.5.1b

I give the game four stars but I always give the details of my rating in the comments. Models are gorgeous and if there was any clipping issues in their design I didn't spot any. Frankly the story is way more intriguing than the game page leads you to believe with the mystical side of this visual novel. The element of " okay wait what is happening ?" is definitely present and I didn't see it coming when looking at the game page. Now why 4 and not 5? Has to do with the only real issue I have and it's a common issue which is pacing. I know there's a supernatural element involved but if there had been at least a Time skip of a week it wouldn't have felt so odd at times. The dialogue and everything is wonderfully written and different personalities captured very well. But I would have liked to have seen at least the illusion that sometime had passed and  theMC had gotten time to know the characters at least in the background. But that's my personal taste I just always found the hole I know we just met but I think I love you thing kind of weird and jarring.

That being said I still think this visual novel is worth downloading to anyone who is a fan of erotic visual novels and I will be purchasing the paid version of the game in the coming days soon. 

holy crap short but powerful for sure. keep making more you have talent!

how come the Sprite used for Natasha is a black girl but the character image is just a basic white girl? Feels weird and kind of a bit of a letdown.....

the links dont work????

its fun good use of sound but feel like it needs more somehow

CJ's theme makes me want to go kick ass

any news?????

not me jumping like a kid on christmas!!!!!

i cant wait to download this tomorrow!!!!

Not ready to leave my rating just yet but so far I'm enjoying the graphics character models and the story. Everything so far is being well done. Tho I have to say I'm a little bit nervous when it was said in the beginning that there will be multiple choices but it won't matter for the ending of the story. Feels a little bit like some players are going to be a little bit heartbroken with whoever he ends up with....... unless this is a harem story of some sort or polyamorous Triad I don't know.

Five star rating and you deserve every Star! I have to say especially coming down to the wire at the end I was getting major chills. With no way to save your progress it really put on the pressure to pay attention to everything to make the right choices. Proud to say I managed to figure it out in the end sticking to my gut. You got some real talent for storytelling would love to see other similar games made by you in the future.

I got to say I've tried a few of these types of games before and never really enjoyed them despite a desire to want to. They were always stressful in the wrong ways quickly overwhelming you before you feel like you had a fair chance. But this game is much more enjoyable take on the style. I feel like you're on to something with the way you do things here and would love to see more.

immediate five stars there's a water world reference

Maybe you could consider charging for other chapters past the first release and treat the first release as a demo or teaser. Patreon gets first dibs and then maybe you could charge $5 for the game here on itch and have the update delayed maybe a week. you could always increase the price a little bit as the game gets longer as well.  I say all this because I do think you have potential. 

will it be coming to itch????

Oh my God I have missed the story so much I'm so glad it's back !!!!!

Well this game kind of came out of nowhere for me. Gave it a shot when it came across my feed as another developer I follow gave it a good five stars. The writing is really good the art is beautiful and so far I'm enjoying exploring. Though I will say I have One Singular complaint that takes a bit of explaining. The main character needs an offhand slot for equipment. Despite what rising of The Shield hero and Captain America will make you think a shield is not a main weapon and should not take the place of a sword as well as a sword breaker is a offhand weapon meant to in theory catch the blade of a Rapier and also should not be a main weapon. I wouldn't mind seeing a future update with an offhand slot where these items would instead boost things like fortitude as well increase armor for the midsection maybe adding extra damage when parrying for the swordbreaker. 

Has anybody actually had that work because I've gone to the mall a couple of times now bouncing around the map trying to get it to trigger and it's not working.

Update figured it out despite on Tuesday clicking on the couch saying can't do that you have a date it's actually the following day that the event will trigger and you can go to the park.

I waited until a little more was out to give the game a shot and so far 4 stars overall. All the models are rendered very well the world doesn't feel empty at all in any shot. I have to say the dev has a real talent for this from the World building models all the way to the writing itself. Even in just two chapters the dev does a really good job of letting the player get a sense of deciding who they are in the story. there are a couple of bull opportunities where that could have also been demonstrated but whether my opinion in that is true or not it certainly does not impact the game in a negative way whatsoever. Truly a good story with interesting lore to explore further in future updates without a doubt add this to the list of ones to watch out for updates.

...... either nothing is changing or I am terrible at this game ...... like I want to play it and I'm usually good at spot the different stuff ...... but it feels like the game just rushes to tell me too many anomalies when I can't even find one