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goliard

That looks like it could be fun! I’m always impressed when people are able arrange words into a rhythm and have them rhyme. 

And the story’s really interesting! I like how the grandma and wolf are the same person. And that she tries, albeit poorly, to explain it by pointing to the practical jokes. If everyone’s an anthropomorphic animal, that basically makes her a cannibal. Horrific indeed!

There are a couple changes I’d want to make. Would that be okay?

But I’ll have to see what everyone else thinks.

Thanks for the kind words! Yes, I wanted wolf/granny to be one and the same, like Norman Bates' mother in "Psycho". Changes? Yeah, I'm not too precious about my work -- it's out there, which is what I wanted.