Hello,
As you already know, I streamed your game last weekend. Overall, it's an inoffensive game, but I wish it attempted to achieve more.
There has been a noticeable improvement when compared to the old version of this game, Project Alldevaih. It's clear you have grown a lot as a game developer since then, and so that should never go understated: you're definitely on the right path!
However, the biggest flaw I have with this game is the fact that it is a game. As far as game play elements go, it really seems to be lacking as there are no interesting choices to be made any where. It simply is to walk from point A to point B and let the mystery solve itself with little work from the player.
I hope in whatever your future game is, I hope you will begin to implement some gameplay ideas, even if in a small part, such as branching and meaningful dialogue choices and/or (if you wish to continue to stick with the mystery/crime genre) clues & evidence hunts.
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If you'd like to watch my experience with your game, I've linked the archive below. You can click the timestamps to jump to when I start playing your game.