So, first of all, nice \o/ :D
Some input tho after playing into Claires stuff: I mean, I love getting into the thick of it fast, but damn... :D some introduction to the characters after the intro would help, also some closing off, like, yeah, the guys in the locker think she is an easy lay if she lets Andrew bang her, but they do so without her even meetting Andrew, which is kinda weird. Also, some introduction to Sex Work, like discussing with the spouse how to make money or something? Its just bang, go for it now :D
Dunno, maybe you plan to do all that, after all this is mostly a overhaul of the systems, so I guess you will go onto story and stuff more in coming updates :D
Haven't seen Paul yet, because sad he didn't get as much love q.q gimme bunch of Paul stuff xPP