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Mhm, I guess I just don't understand, in my headcanon the app just can't track the past accurately and she did have sex with MC before all this started xD, maybe I gotta revise that later depending on how the story that I dont know yet plays out :D but oke, its a minor thing anyway :D Tbh, maybe a indicator on what path the player is would be cool, right now we are flying blind, but not sure, stuff like a indicator how many pictures we have unlocked and the like seems to be in the works already after all :) 

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And about the last question, yeah, I want to be a good boyfriend who is there for her and that she loves, but she still sleeps with other guys, be it with my permission or as cheating (dunno, maybe because she turns out to be a size queen, after all the MC is kinda underdeveloped compared to the Matt guy xD) I just feel kinda bad to neglect her to get her so sleep with him :D Cute loving slut girlfriend xD just some thought about the future pretty much, just go on, I am looking forward to future updates to see what happens :)

Well, I will hope then xP

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Some more feedback, I played around with paths and stuff and it feels kinda weird that the App "knows" she is a virgin (even before the nanobots) and that she is one at all? Like, the way we can have sex is in a really casual "no big deal" way and for me personally it doesn't make much sense that she is still a virgin in the first place :D Feels like either she shouldn't be or the first time that the MC can have sex with her when we go with the loyal route (i suspect it is the loyal route :D) should be a bigger deal :D

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And a question: Will there also be a route where I can be loving and always there for her without holding her back? :D I kinda want to be the "good boyfriend" and her doing what she does on the route where I dont have time for her anyway :x XP

Well, the text speed is a minor concern, if 1440p and a way to organize the posts is implemented my major gripes with it are already fixed :D

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And about Sam, well, the first impression is certainly pretty bad if you don't want to say no to your GF xD But I'm gonna follow along and I am open (and am more then happy) to be proven wrong about her :3

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On a side note: "I consider myself more of a depraved developer then a normal one" will that translate into some more niche kinks or stuff implemented? xP I am always for variety and most are kinda "vanilla" aside from the ntr itself xD

It was actually pretty great until you brought the "cunt best friend"-trope in who I can't even tell off... sorry man... but so many games make that mistake, people need to fucking learn that a disrespectfull asshole friend is NOT something any normal person tolerates... and it makes the game worse!

I don't mind the full on drive into the whole ntr thing, is kinda refreshing instead of the typical slow build up in these, but a FUN, and respectful best friend that is slutty and indirectly influences the girl is just WAY better then a cunt which we can't even tell off, no matter what kind of guy we play... I just have to lay over because of her dumb threats? Nah man...

It's still interesting, don't wanna generally bash on it, but I am SO tired of that trope :x :D

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On a purely technical note, the ShareSpaces pictures probably would be better to be organized the other way around? Make it so the newest is always on top and the player doesn't have to scroll down everytime :)

And the resolution settings, 1080 is kinda small for people that use 1440p, but 1560p cuts off important parts at the bottom, not sure if 1560 is somehow good for phones, but for people playing on PC a 1440p resolution would be great <3

And the textspeed is better then most of these games, but for replays a option for instant texts would be nice, but I get that thats probably not a priority (the other two should be in my opinion  tho) :D

Wow, another one of 102932748 boring straight games now... suit yourself...

Pretty pathetic tho, to bend to some morons instead of following your own plan...

So, just wanted to say, this looks pretty promising so far, nice work, a well known scenario, but some intresting spins on it (like Son and Neighboor being in it together instead of "Rivals", like that) Certainly will keep an eye on it and think about a lil pledge.

PS: I hope you keep up that the Husbands perspective is completly skippable, very much prefer the immersion it gives only to have my MCs perspective. :)

I mean, it would make sense if you want to go longer then 30 days :D (and keep a bit of a forced thing going) :D

So, first of all, nice \o/ :D

Some input tho after playing into Claires stuff: I mean, I love getting into the thick of it fast, but damn... :D some introduction to the characters after the intro would help, also some closing off, like, yeah, the guys in the locker think she is an easy lay if she lets Andrew bang her, but they do so without her even meetting Andrew, which is kinda weird. Also, some introduction to Sex Work, like discussing with the spouse how to make money or something? Its just bang, go for it now :D

Dunno, maybe you plan to do all that, after all this is mostly a overhaul of the systems, so I guess you will go onto story and stuff more in coming updates :D

Haven't seen Paul yet, because sad he didn't get as much love q.q gimme bunch of Paul stuff xPP 

Looking really good, pretty much just as good as fully hand drawn and damn, I would take that for the time saving too... :D

It certainly looks "cleaner" then fully drawn (for lack of a better word), but I think it comes pretty close to the same charme of the handdrawn backgrounds, if not 100% of course, but if it makes it more efficient then thats a pretty good trade off I would say :)

Ouuh, we are gettin close huh? Exited to find out whats going on xP

Pfuuuuh, not sure I like dis as a Bisexual who wants everything xP

But I will stay positive and watch how it goes :P

The background picture, haha :D 

Overall nice tho, yep :D

Well, that looks promising, I mean, it is very early, so I don't want to criticise the content or lack thereof at the moment :D

To the animations tho, don't know if they can be sharpened up a bit? But the most glaring part is for me the speed, they feel a bit too fast? Minor thing tho and it seems you are still working on the basic parts there, will definitly keep an eye on this tho and hope for more stuff in the future :D

I mean, I like the setting and tags, and games with content for F/M and M/M are so rare :x :D and the main chars seem cute :D

I actually like that the bully character isn't some muscle bear for once, but a somewhat normal guy with a big dick :D

Not much content yet, but a promising start.

Dont see why you shouldnt do explicit sex scenes with him, he is 18 and done... if someone doesnt want to see a scene it's easy to choose against it after all? I mean, what next, no Main Character x Headmaster because too much age difference ect? Its not "You need to look 18 years old", its "You need to BE 18 years old" after all xD

And tbh, I dont see a big age difference in looks between him and the main character O_O

Well, if you dont do it its okay too, if you want that, but do what you want, not what someone thinks you should :D

I would agree with that, the pictures are the eye candy, sure, seeing many of them is great, but yeah, the storyflow is mostly trough text and bringing in more text and details in it improves the overall story. I would say its in the balance, you dont want people to look at the same picture for 10 minutes while reading (obviously :D), but you dont need a new picture every 10 seconds either :D Plus: Text brings out all the details you cant put in a picture, so it makes the scenes lively and believable :D

Other then that, mhm, for now I would focus on storytelling I guess and if you want to bring in new funtionalities, one at a time is probably best :D

Well, you should try things out of course :D just one after another, too many of these games crash because they try to do 20 things at the same time ^^, but since you know that yourself I have a good feeling for that :D and as said, for a beginner its a really good start :) will certainly see that I play the updates and give feedback:)

Well, I can work with that :D

For a beginner in this the quality is really high, so I hope for much more in the future, would be absolutly willing to bring a few bucks out when its a bit bigger for this ^^ 

And I do like how the scenes, especially the locker room one, differ greatly depending on the relationship/choices (though, why can Vincent get left behind tied up and body marked in the locker room, but not me? Give me equality!!! ;DD, na, still like the scene :D), instead of being just slight variations ^^, but looking at that it is probably good that you concentrate more on one more linear single route, that spares you the mistake of many others to make too much routes, which slows down the progress. 

It certainly is a great start, I especially love the design of the main character.

Hope you keep this going :3

(Personally I would appreciate a little Textdocument with Tips for Routes to go, no need for something fancy, I just like to see the other scenes after I done a blind play in games like that, but thats just me. :D)