A really nice game with a great atmosphere, graphics, and story! For your next update, I'd customize the menu GUI to match the aesthetic of the graphics and make the navigation menu smaller as it distracts from the dialogue a bit. There's a point in the game where the game says, "It's not too late to turn back," but then you are only given one menu option. It's not a big deal but from an interactive fiction standpoint, I was expecting to have a choice after that but wasn't given one. The "voice-over" was a bit overstimulating, made it difficult to read the dialogue at the same time. But again, great job!
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Thank you so much for the advice! I think that should be my next step changing the menu and the visuals of the options for naviation, also that whole aspect of more choice and interactivity, that part where you mentioned there should have been a choice, sadly there was but I ended up having to take it out cause I didnt have enough time to expand on it, I will have to see how i can implement it among other things, and yes the voices in certain parts seem to have been abit to loud, but thank you for trying it!