I did not think i would enjoy it as much as i did: the story is very well told, the “Sir Hiddler” joke was a nice touch, and the sound effects help a lot to feel like i am there, too.
It seems, though, that sometimes the text mixes the first and second person, calling me “you” and “I” in the same paragraph, just as this one:
That sort of thing happen in jam games :)
Well done!